Monday, October 5, 2009

Activity 9

WORDS
1) "Queen of a silent film with one last swoon left in her"
2) "Shawn cast a bewildered look, forearms thickly cabled, face freckled and ruddy" He likes to fix things form the bottom up. and has a deep passion for his cat.
3)Chronic renal failure, kidneys weren't filtering out the toxins in her blood anymore. To find a easier way to describe it.
4)They all show love towards their animals. the "Last Meow" is probably gonna explore their tribulations and how far they would go.
SENTENCES
1) Probably to make it less boring and to relieve us of this long paragraph.
2) Background info. Kind of to help you with reading it.
3)Maybe to overwhelm us and to inform us.
PARAGRAPHS
1)Newspaper articles are read at a 5th grade reading level. These paragraphs in "Last Meow" are a little bit more advanced.

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